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2007年天津市
日前,由教育部、国家体育总局、共青团中央联合举办了“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动”启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远。你在本校参与了此项活动,请你根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文。
内容 ● 学校师生收看了启动仪式; ● 开展了一小时的集体体育活动,如: 跑步,做操,打篮球等
感想 ● 锻炼有利于强身健体; ● 运动使大脑休息,学习效果更好; ● 每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子 注意:
1. 词数80~100个左右。
2. 短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
3. 短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节和适当发挥,使短文通顺、连贯。
4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
参考词汇:the launching ceremony 启动仪式;
build up one’s body strength 强身健体
more effective 效果更好
“ Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine ” launched on April 29 , 2007 . The teachers and students in our school were organized to
满分文(一)
“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.
I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.
点评:作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚,表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时,常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀,没有连续性,而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题,运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。
积累卡片 英汉互译 好词 1.nationwide全国2.launch启动3.strength力量4.effective有效的 好句 1.I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. 我认为这是增强体力的一个很好方法。 2.To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. 每天做一个小时的运动会使我们一生都幸福快乐,所以我会坚持下去的。
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