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2007年沈阳市
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背景:这所学校建于三年前,当时有数百名儿童因贫困而失学,后来人们为“希望工程 (Hope Project)”捐款200余万元,当地政府用这笔款项兴建了这所学校。
现状:教师60人,学生900人,教学楼内有18个教室,另有1,200平方米的操场,微机室,语音室,图书馆各一个。这所学校已远近闻名,学生们都很努力,因为是希望工程给了他们学习的机会。
满分文(一)
The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.
Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters .
The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.
点评:同样,这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章,作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅,基本无语法错误,作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇,如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。
积累卡片 英汉互译 好词 1. government 政府 2. offer 提供 3. pupil 小学生 4. bright 明亮的 5. meter 米 好句 1. Thus the school came into being. 因此学校就成立了。 2. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school. 那里的学生学习都很刻苦,因为他们知道是希望工程给了他们上学的机会。
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